Posts Tagged ‘email marketing’

What A Disaster

Thursday, May 26th, 2011

My neighbor Stan is in the advice business. And like all of us, he’s continually focusing on building his client base.

Stan decided to do an email marketing blast to a very targeted (and expensive) email list of prospects. I think the list was a bit more than 5,000.

Guess how many people opened the email? (I’m not talking about reading it, or acting on it-which are the next steps)…simply how many people just opened the email?

Zip…Nada…Bupkiss…

Needless to say (but I’ll say it anyway) Stan was pretty upset.

Anyway, I like Stan (he keeps an eye out on the house when Marian and I are on vacation) so I told him I’d do some editing on his email.

So I made one change and guess what? The second time the blast went out, the open rate was 21%. (Which is really good considering that this was a cold list that didn’t know Stan from the proverbial hole in the ground.)

So what was this change?

To fully appreciate it, we need to remember that in email marketing (and the same holds true for sales letters) there is a sequence of steps that we need to motivate the reader to go through.

With email that first step is…GET IT OPENED.

And there’s one thing that will make or break your prospects decision to do that .

What You Put In The Subject Line.

The first step in email marketing lives and dies on that one thing. (Of course we can mess up the process after that, but if we don’t get it opened, everything else is a moot point.)

So what do we want to put in the subject line?

Focus on “Negative Curiosity”

One of my coaches, Frank Kern, relates that the highest open rate he ever had for an email was one in which the subject line was, “Bad News.”

In fact, you may have noticed that I used this strategy for the email that eventually led you to read this article. The subject line? “What a disaster.”

But, here’s an important point you’ll want to keep in mind.

Although “Negative Curiosity” will get prospects to initially respond to your message, it’s “hope” that will both bond them to you, and ultimately get them to become actually clients.

One strategy to make the transition from “Negative Curiosity” to “Hope” is to offer your readers great content. Practical ideas they can use. Answers to the most common questions that you get asked. Remember, you want your reader at the end of your message to really believe you’re the expert in your particular field. That’s how you build relationships and eventually more paying clients.

But…the first step in the process is to get people to pay attention to you. That’s why focusing on “Negative Curiosity” in the subject line is so powerful. (But you have to do it creatively, not ham-handedly.)

Good luck, and as always, if I can ever be of assistance please let me know.

Thanks
Mark
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How Long Should A Sales Letter Be?

Tuesday, May 11th, 2010

A Gentle Rain Reader writes…

Hi Mark,
I’m confused. How long should a sales letter be?
How about for a lead-generation email? Thanks-Tim Long

My reply:

The first thing to keep in mind is that length is secondary to content. If you bore your readers, two sentences can be too long. However there are some general guidelines to keep in mind.

First about sales letters…If you’re writing in the B2C market (business to consumer) there is truth to the adage ” The more you tell, the more you sell.” As direct marketers and top copywriters Dan Kennedy, Clayton Makepeace and Denny Hatch all point out, a 2-page sales letter out-performs a 1-page letter, a 4-page letter gets a better response than a 2 page.

Where’s the top? I honestly don’t know. In theory a book should outperform a letter and a
l-o-n-g book should do better than a short one. But keeping reality in mind, if you’re marketing to consumers, don’t worry about length. I once wrote two sales letters for a fitness studio. One was 4 pages, the other 8. The longer sales letter did in fact pull a greater number of leads by a factor of 3.

However in b2b marketing it’s a bit of different story. My opinion is that length does matter. In order to get through the various screeners and anti-promotional mindsets, our sales letters need to look very much like business correspondence. The copy should convey the tone of easy familiarity from one executive to another.

Length? I’d keep it to no more than 2 pages.

With emails, I would as a general rule keep them short and link the rest of the copy to your website. (As I’ve done here.) That’s one of the things I really love about WordPress sites. They enable you to add blog pages with the content that you “tease” in your emails.

Hope that helps. I’m interested in what others think so let me know.

Thanks
Mark